Standing On The Outside

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    Written for my best friend!

    Standing On The Outside

    I'm standing on the outside
    looking in
    and what I find is
    the story of a man broken

    I see the tears beading
    upon his heart
    I stand watching the pieces
    drift apart

    I'm standing on the outside
    looking in
    and what more I see is
    the spirit of a marvel being

    I see him broke like a
    glass of wine
    a million pieces shattered
    throughout time

    I want to reach out to take him in
    as a part of me
    I want to breath into him life
    for a world to see

    I'm standing on the outside
    looking in
    So take me in but
    slowly trusting my hand

    I'll bid away your sorrows
    and gift you the sun
    I'll lift you up holding
    you until time comes undone

    I see you inside out
    like you see me through to end
    Coz' your standing on the outside, too
    looking in

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    redbloodink commented on Standing On The Outside

    07-21-2010

    wow this touched me deep.... Reminds me of me as Jesus has healed me from a lot of pain... He is still working on a couple of things that linger but my insides are cleaned up and for the outside I'll always be just a imperfect human anyway....... red oh by the way nice write......
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