suicide

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    suicide

     i wonder what it would be like to stand on the edge of a tall building
    to look down, where the cars seem to be the size of ants
    to completely let go
    just jump off and disappear from this life

    i'm standing on the edge of 50 story building
    looking down at my end
    i'm prepared to jump
    just let go of life

    i spread my arms out wide
    like wings, reading to fly
    but instead i'll be flying
    but i will feel free as a bird

    nothing can stop me
    from jumping off this building
    from committing suicide
    from letting go of life

    1, 2, 3...JUMP

    i'm falling
    faster and faster i go
    i've never felt so free
    i regret nothing

    soon i will hit the ground
    and feel nothing at all
    no more sadness
    no more anger

    i will feel nothing
    because very soon i'll be gone
    forever
    no turning back

    nothing could save me from this

    BAM

    i'm gone

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    Phission commented on suicide

    01-23-2013

    it was sad falling to the ground with you in this poem. well done when a poem can make you feel through words and you can even smell the city and the street and wind rushing and brushing harshly against your face. well done.
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    emilyAKAninja

    01/23/2013

    thanks (:

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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