Thank-you Father

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Thank-you Father

As I walked those many miles, to find the self within;

Never certain of my steps or what would be lurking.

 

I crossed those miles in dread and fear of smiles and the spoken word;

Trusting not the outreached palm nor reaching out to be heard.

 

So solemn in my solitude and lost in fear and mistrust;

A fossil lived were once was heart…and not where once was us.

 

Regressing in my thoughts and hopes, my Soul the only salvation;

Or so it seemed with blackened dreams as ‘twas…before creation.

 

I spoke not words of kindness, in a time when not was felt;

But kindness being not spoken…was given as I knelt;

 

While bending knees and bowing head, my heart was lifted up;

With visions of a life long passed…and thoughts of a half-filled cup.     

 

 I woke to find that you were there, and you…would always be,

But sleep had blinded mind and soul, and you…I couldn’t see.

 

How can I give a greater gift than that, which was given me;

My hopes renewed and faith restored, now spirit…flying free.

 

What comes to mind can never be measured, or ever duplicated;

A gift of life, as once was given…and never separated;

 

For in the beginning was the Word and the Word created man,

And the Word was Flesh and the Flesh was tasked…to spread throughout the land.

 

Symbolically, I give the gift…of love unconditionally;

I send my trust, my faith, my prayers…and total loyalty.

 

I send this gift which can’t be measured, duplicated…or even heard;

This gift so great and yet so small…as given in a word...Thank-you.

by Trular

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DeepEclipse commented on Thank-you Father

07-01-2010

[Trusting not the outreached palm nor reaching out to be heard.] - Man you couldn't of been more right. I know that road and slip back into it from time to time. Its true though. It only works against itself. Like painting yourself into a corner. Elegantly crafted piece with excellent meter. He knows that we are but dust. He knows exactly what we need. Moving piece.

twaja commented on Thank-you Father

06-18-2010

DAMN!!!!! WHAT A WAY TO TELL OUR FATHER THANK YOU. YOU R SOOO GIFTED. THOSE WHO BELIEVE CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM

euroyankee2003 commented on Thank-you Father

09-28-2009

In so few words, you have spoken volumes............

lvds commented on Thank-you Father

09-26-2009

this poem is beautiful, and with it i can relate to the words, and know this family is lucky to have it

Trular

09/26/2009

Thank-you!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

Trular’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Beginning of it All 0
My Angel Walked Before Me In This Soldier Song 1
The Chance We Miss 1
When Morning Came 2
Song of Life 1
Thank-you Father 4
TRANQUILITY 3
I Wish 1
Wake-up Tomorrow 2
Oh My Soul 1
Your Friend 1
Friend 1
"One America …Stand-up" 3
The Flight 2
Beauty of the Darkness 2
A Walk With Me 3