That Melting Feeling

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  • 4 days until graduation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

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melting, dying horrible...all the breakup feelings of a typical high school teenage girl :P

That Melting Feeling

 

That Melting Feeling

on the verge of collapsing
i'm falling to the ground
i thought you would always love me
i'm numb enough to die
this zombie-like feeling
is getting to my head
it's just one guy
let's give it another try
i won't fall as hard again

 

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Zombie6622’s Poems (44)

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Bringing About Delicious Amounts of Affliction and Fire 1
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Honey Suckle, Cherry Top. Who's The Freak You Love A Lot? 0
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Results of a Torn Mind 1
Guardian Angel 0
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Freakishly Wild 0
Unrequested Heartache 1
My Sick Mind and Intentions 1
#Monster# 1
Addict 1
BiRdS oF AnOtHeR CoLoR 0
Notions 1
Whispers in the Dark 1
Raw Power 1
Let's Be Friends 0
Rave Boi 0
Private Tutor 0
Rush Me. Rock Me. Lo-Lo-Love Me 0
Dancing♫ with a Broken Heart 0
Jackal 0
Sugar Lips 0
Aftershock 0
The Sandman Is Out Of Town 0
Unlucky Rabbit's Foot 1
Human and Life 0
Judgment of an Outcast 0
don’t know if i can yell any louder 1
don’t know if i can yell any louder 0
you the fool 0
Like a paper that’s been crinkled up, I cant be perfect again 0
the days of heartbreak 0
the toxic touch 0
zOmBie 0
TUMS 0
That Melting Feeling 0
Drag is the New Fad 0
The Seriousness 0
Neverland Girl 0
Rock Bottom 0
a Haunting Love 0
Here 1