Unlucky Rabbit's Foot

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alice in wonderland?

Unlucky Rabbit's Foot

in the heart of the rabbit hole
i'm regretting what i did
i followed you here
to this everlasting pit
this mysterious and curious place
filled wonders and mystics
it's beautiful at 1st
then it all comes crashing down

from the hatter with the crazy eyes
to the singing teacup mouse
from the oyster stories 
to the freaky twins
to the caterpillar’s smoke rings that make your head spin round
and round
and round

in the distance is a castle
maybe i can find some help
but all i get is a death threat
and now i'm running for my life
a smile disappears with in the trees of this dark forest
a distinct smell of cat nip is left behind in the dust

i'm still running from the playing cards
that chase me down for my head
and as im running
i trip and bump my head

i open my eyes
and to my surprise
it was all a dream
at least that's all i can really makes sense of
a dream....a fantasy....an adventure

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Viper89 commented on Unlucky Rabbit's Foot

03-12-2011

That's a funny poem!!! Your own mysterious trip down the rabbit's hole!!! You need to check out my poem called "Story Of A Portal" it basically the same thing!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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