The Journey to I AM

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    The Journey to I AM

    As I patiently wait my turn
    My eyes start to burn

    Must be the dust

    Follicles float
    So the bottle holding the note
    For it's long awaited reader

    Destine to fate
    Destine to fail to be great
    Destine to make the impression
    That leaves a particle trail

    Inhaled through the nose
    Now weighs the pros and cons

    Life but a reflection
    Vast pass the lessons

    Was it meant?

    Look over the spectacles
    To see clearly past the tint

    A life time spent
    With aimless intent
    The doc lets you vent

    Pent up frustration
    Vibrations leaving a 9 on the richter

    So what's the big picture?

    Cinematic debut
    A view from both sides
    Audience and Director

    Box office hit
    Maybe a cult classic

    Either way
    Makes it way
    Into the archives of time

    The rest is left to the mind
    Simply to find the line

    I AM.

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    cynthiakehl commented on The Journey to I AM

    05-26-2009

    loved the way you wrote this! an honest examination of your life, good or bad we tend to try to find ourselves! kudos!

    lightcourier commented on The Journey to I AM

    05-02-2009

    I liked where you took this. Also liked the jerk and pull meter. nice. Thanks!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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