the things

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    the things

    what got to do  in mylife are sometimes hard to do or let go
    I know cuaes im doing it right now im goin for my dreams over love and the ones I know in my home town NY  im so so so far way from my home im in cail colombia working on my goles and dreams but that life we all have to let go of something or some one to get what we want right

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    laydbak1 commented on the things

    07-03-2009

    yes, you are exactly right... but, who says we have to always give up something to get something else... perhaps, we just put one thing on hold, to gain or achieve another... we may come back to it again... if it's worth coming back for.... a good write

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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