Hypnotize
I hypnotize A cuite when I was all alone in a room playing the piano i got him in spell in a trance baby I didnt know I could do that just by playing the piano alone nice right I was so in to it the music i feel it cuase I Hypnotize him and i did hahah im good i am hot like fire im a leo a sexy mama LIke A charm I feel bright AND cheerful AND AT THE same time nervous and surprised when he came in the room I stop and he sayed keep goin but i didnt i was shy so he was gone and then i played maybe next time I keep goin yup all this in music school cool right and Im hot like that u feel me si I was feeling the music in the room by my slife and i got so so in to it that he showed up wow im good like that cool nice yea.Hypnotize
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laydbak1 commented on Hypnotize
07-04-2009
- The message here is good and draws a very nice image of the story... A shy, and somewhat coy, musical person appears infatuated by someone who admires them very much... This is a very nice piece but, it really needs editing by an English speaking person and reposted with corrections.... A good story though...
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wildpendigus commented on Hypnotize
07-03-2009
- I really hope I can be hypnotized by a female pretty of course! and I love the title and the content I also feel it would be a good love romance ballad, show a lot of talent and also a lot of creativity! WP
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