While He Sleeps

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    While He Sleeps

    While He Sleeps
    Breathing slowly deeply

    beside me

    I stare at the room (blue peace with white whispers)

    and remember other rooms, always blue and soft

    (is it ocean or sky? I never can decide)



    but sleep is courting you

    as I watch from the front porch

    too lost in the sweetness of night

    the quiet

    to close my eyes

    inside my head I hum a tune

    with forgotten words

    but a melody that causes a familiar ache

    the smell of salt

    a summer lost

    too many rotations ago

    the fan blows a breeze across my skin

    making the white on the windows dance

    You stir....

    I try to still myself

    and resist the urge to touch

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    GeoffreyMalloy commented on While He Sleeps

    05-24-2009

    This was nice, drawing in the senses through retrospection, and stirring the mind to recollection. Made me think and smile of my own. Very cool! };y

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