WHO CARES!

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At times one feel unmotivated. One expects people around one to acknowledge and appreciate or celebrate one's successes and achievement but instead receive cold silence from the suppose friends, family members and relatives. The truth is that people outside the family, relative and friend circles could be more encouraging...

WHO CARES!

 How bitter, to be in a careless world,

Where no-one appreciates any

Where no-one cares about your outcome

Where no-one praise

Where well-done is missing

 

Such world seems here!

Wanting to receive well-done

But rather cold silence

Not even asking to know

Not even cares if you make it

 

Bright achievements and successes

Awards, certificates, diplomas, and merits

All gone without applause

Without one appreciating

As if nothing has been achieved or done

 

Keeping the zeal and forging ahead

As if a new dawn is come

As if change will turn-in

But yet not from any, not even one

Who cares! Who cares!

 

But some cares!

Out there, they care

Calling, mailing and hailing

Saying well-done loudly

Clapping and standing for the champion

 

What a place, a careless place

What a mind, occupied mind

What a friend, selfish friend

Yet this have I known

Those outsiders better insiders

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countrypoet commented on WHO CARES!

12-03-2009

This is a very powerful poem with strong emotion.You have an amazing talent for poetry and should be proud.Continue to share your wonderful talent as I care and like reading your poems.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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