Wonder

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Wonder

I wonder if you can hear me. I wonder if you know I'm lost.

     I'm lost inside my heart. Thinking you are not near me, makes me feel lonely. Knowing your gone leaves me heartbroken. Inside, every mile away from you leaves cracks.

Every tear i shed made me believe I wouldn't see you again. But the little voice in my brain says, you love me, you want to see me and one day we would be together again.

     I shall wait till you return, I promise that i shall not cry, be frustrated or feel lonely till you return.

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cynthiakehl commented on Wonder

08-08-2009

I enjoyed this simple and sweet love poem :) thx 4 sharing!

Dreamer123

08/08/2009

your welcome thanks for your time. God bless you :D thanks alot.

Lolee commented on Wonder

07-26-2009

I always said, it does not matter the age...anyone can fall in love. Amazing...

Dreamer123

07/26/2009

thanks lolee! your awesome thanks alot so much God Bless you

786mona commented on Wonder

07-21-2009

i like this poem but the "Your" should be "You are" in 2nd line. and in the 36rd line same mistake.' but over all great poem, love it:):D:DD:D

Dreamer123

07/22/2009

opps! Sorry my bad thanks :D a lot hahahaha I kind of forgot that hahahaha thanks :D God Bless!

aysha commented on Wonder

07-18-2009

Very nice poem!!!!!! You share lots of emotions in this

Dreamer123

07/18/2009

Thanks Alot!! AWw! I love your poems as well. Thanks for your comment God Bless!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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