Be Erased or Be Kept


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Be Erased or Be Kept

Sorry if i hurt you. I'm sorry you think i wouldn't trust or believe you no more. Sure your disappointed.  But truth is I wouldn't erase you, crumble, burn, rip, brake, or torn pieces of our memory. Sure days pass us by and you might miss me, or cry for me. But truth is you must leave the past to the past. What may happen now might last, but inside my heart our memories and our priceless times we share.  What you shall remember shall never thus erase unless thus shall avoid or diminish the great, amazing, wonderful memories.

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muttman1 commented on Be Erased or Be Kept


Wow such a mature piece for someone your age, I've actually have said something like this to an ex of mine, keep writing I'm sure you will be an excellent writer, making money.



hahaha! Thank you! Thank you very much! I actually wrote this to keep all of the memories of my friends and the people I love. Thank you God bless!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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