Would you miss your life?

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  • hcrellers
  • February 5th, Friday morning, purple dawn... A moment like a poem, you wish you could hold it... I shut my eyes like it's frozen... it's gone when I open...

Would you miss your life?

If you were to die tomorrow,

Could you say you had the most fun?

Laughed more than you cried?

Had many friends, not acquaintances...

Made up after every fight...

Lived the fullest life?

No regrets or blimishes,

You did everything you wanted...

No business left unfinshed.

 

 

Could you say you listened to your heart,

Without a thought from your mind?

Always did what was right...

And fixed what you did wrong?

Did you tell everyone you loved that you love them?

Did you get to say everything you meant?

No words left unspoken...

Would you look back and see me?

Miss the times we shared...

And wish there was more there?

Would you know that you were loved...

By every life you touched?

 

 

Those who look up to you...

Would you know that you changed their life?

Could you say that you were true to you?

No lies or compromises...

You always stood for truth

And fought for justice

Could you die knowing that you let everyone know you?

Not who you thought they wanted to see...

Could you say you really were true to yourself?

To me?

 

 

Would you know what you were worth?

How much greatness was inside of you

That you died too soon...

What you could of done for people in your time?

That truely you are a leader...

Not a sheep in a world full of followers.

Then would you believe in you?

Could you be able to see what you were like to me?

Would you know all the people to mourn loosing your life?

Imagine what you meant...

And how many people in such darkness

Depended on your light...

 

 

If you were to die tomorrow

Would you miss your life?

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lithiumblack commented on Would you miss your life?

01-27-2010

I love poetry and strings of thought that challenge people. A blind man could see the pointed finger in this piece. Another outstanding piece.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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