Wishing Star

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  • hcrellers
  • February 5th, Friday morning, purple dawn... A moment like a poem, you wish you could hold it... I shut my eyes like it's frozen... it's gone when I open...

Wishing Star

The world was dark before she walked in.

She brightened everything.

Illuminating my life; She casted shadows on my imperfections.

I tell you she shined like the Sun.

Golden morning’s burn into my memory...

More like a comet; she has slipped away from me.

I never understood her; her mind like another dimension.

The day I met her, the way she flew around me...

I knew time with her was fleeting.

She was free; something that couldn't be tamed...

But she wanted me, and that was enough.

I belonged to her if anything; I held her too tightly.

I never told her she would be able to break me.

I couldn't trust something with that much power.

I took for granted, my beautiful Sun.

Her absence louder than every word she'd ever spoken...

My Love, my Sun, gone as fast as I let her in...

Her soft warnings haunt me.

There was none before her, and nothing after.

I drift automatically, away from her gravity.

I can't fight the darkness knowing what I'm missing...

The center of my Universe is gone.

My Love, my Sun, now just a distant star...

I'll wish on her until she hears my heart.

 

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LGDisturb commented on Wishing Star

01-28-2010

im having a difficult time deciding if you are actually talking about our sun, or something else, either way its a beautiful portrayal of love and admiration, affection and nastalgia. VERY well done, kudos

hcrellers

01/29/2010

im talkin about a person :) that they were like the sun.. its like when you meet someone.. and unknowingly they become the center of ur universe.. thank you again.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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