6:00P.M.

0 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    6:00P.M.
    Dinnertime for many,
    They're done for the day,
    Sitting with their family,
    Just trying to unwind,

    But, for me...
    I'm daydreaming,
    Taking myself to a different place,
    Different space in time,
    When you were mine,

    Some people are just getting up,
    The party-goers or the third shifters,
    Grabbing that cup of coffee,
    Trying to get ready for their day,

    But, for me...
    I'm daydreaming,
    Taking myself to a different place,
    Different space in time,
    When you were mine,

    I remember when we were together,
    Things felt so right,
    But, things went terribly wrong,
    I look through the window,
    I can see us laughing,
    I try to reach through,
    But, the vision vanishes,
    And, I know there's no going back,
    No going back

    But, for me...
    I'm daydreaming,
    Taking myself to a different place,
    Different space in time,
    When you were mine,

    When you were mine
    When you were mine
    Mine

    And, I know there's no going back....
    It's 6:00PM
    Where are you?

    Poem Comments

    (0)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    CarissaMarie’s Poems (27)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Our Story 0 04/28/2011
    Standing Uneasily Still 0 04/05/2010
    For Him 1 09/16/2009
    Walking Contradiction 1 09/04/2009
    Under Lock & Key 0 09/04/2009
    Forever Connected 0 09/04/2009
    Once Held Down, Not Anymore 0 09/04/2009
    Home Sweet Wisconsin 0 09/04/2009
    Redneck City Girl 0 09/04/2009
    Beautiful Wreckage 0 09/04/2009
    Dedicated to the One I Love 0 09/04/2009
    Annilese 0 09/04/2009
    Small Moments, Big Memories 0 09/03/2009
    Different Kind of Christmas Song 1 09/03/2009
    Tribute 0 09/03/2009
    No More Chains 1 09/03/2009
    Through My Eyes 1 09/03/2009
    6:00P.M. 0 09/03/2009
    Drive 0 09/03/2009
    Never Know 0 09/03/2009
    Sunday Afternoon 0 09/03/2009
    More Than Enough 0 09/03/2009
    United We Stand 0 09/03/2009
    Never Forget 0 09/03/2009
    Good-bye to You 0 09/03/2009
    Understudy 0 09/03/2009
    Cliffhanger 0 09/03/2009
    Top of Page