6:00P.M.

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    6:00P.M.

    Dinnertime for many,
    They're done for the day,
    Sitting with their family,
    Just trying to unwind,

    But, for me...
    I'm daydreaming,
    Taking myself to a different place,
    Different space in time,
    When you were mine,

    Some people are just getting up,
    The party-goers or the third shifters,
    Grabbing that cup of coffee,
    Trying to get ready for their day,

    But, for me...
    I'm daydreaming,
    Taking myself to a different place,
    Different space in time,
    When you were mine,

    I remember when we were together,
    Things felt so right,
    But, things went terribly wrong,
    I look through the window,
    I can see us laughing,
    I try to reach through,
    But, the vision vanishes,
    And, I know there's no going back,
    No going back

    But, for me...
    I'm daydreaming,
    Taking myself to a different place,
    Different space in time,
    When you were mine,

    When you were mine
    When you were mine
    Mine

    And, I know there's no going back....
    It's 6:00PM
    Where are you?

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