Addiction

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  • Drugs
    • ravensaflight
    • is so thankful for the positive feedback and now have the confidence I may have been lacking before, so expect more posts! Thanks fellow poets!

    Addiction

     I sit upon a cloud, as high as I can be;
    Looking throught glassy, clouded eyes is the only way I see.
    Surrenduring my everything to the devil in disguise;
    Trapped inside who I've become. No one can hear my cries.
    I inhale a breath of sorow, I swall all my tears,
    I sniffle, then I realize, I'm running from my fears.
    Maybe it's time to face my past and end this needless pain.
    Find relief, exhale, and pour my suffering down the drain.
    Oh Lord, gvie me the strength and the courage to win this fight,
    Because above all else what I desire the most is to lead a normal life!

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    denisepope commented on Addiction

    08-22-2009

    wow. your poems are so good. girl. you need to publish these. i can tell you wrote these from your heart
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    ravensaflight

    08/23/2009

    thank you for taking the time to check them out. I've wanted to be published my whole life but never made it any further than into a few literary magazines...

    wizthom commented on Addiction

    08-12-2009

    u are a tortured soul with a beautiful heart loving ways that been scared
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