An Unformal Invitation

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    An Unformal Invitation

    Let's break bread
    to better days.
    Let's all find
    a better way
    to say the things
    that we really mean
    without being such.
    I'll hush,
    but you got to be
    touched first.
    I want to see you drink
    so you can quench love's thirst.
    Yes, there you go
    sip it.
    Start to come to grip with
    the thought that
    without it, the L word,
    you're not really living.
    Sit, get comfortable,
    stay for a while.
    I want to know how
    your day went -
    connect with your style.
    I'll truly listen;
    remember, the "love thang".
    This is something
    your heart knows,
    and not to be explained.
    If your pain
    was multiplied this week
    then please breathe.
    This invitation is only extended
    to the broken and dis-eased.
    I welcome these...

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    PoeticMind commented on An Unformal Invitation

    03-10-2009

    HUH... yeah dis was not designed for every body.. but the flow (if u know rap) is soo sooo theral..lol i like

    countrypoet commented on An Unformal Invitation

    01-05-2009

    Nice poem.You have a unique style.Keep up the good work.

    boondocker commented on An Unformal Invitation

    01-04-2009

    On a quest to love the unlovable. A mighty task but worthy of recognition.

    poeticlyricist1 commented on An Unformal Invitation

    01-02-2009

    I like. A little unclear though.

    southside commented on An Unformal Invitation

    12-29-2008

    unable to connect with this poem.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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