Fill Me In

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    Fill Me In

    I can't read your mind,
    but I definitely want to help.
    Are you only about you,
    and would you like to
    help yourself?
    Well, go ahead -
    I'll wait here.
    I'll try to endure
    your blank stares.
    I'll encourage myself
    that it no longer stinks here,
    even if it does.
    I'm not into what was.
    What is - is my concern,
    and that's my latest buzz.
    If it's unpopular with you
    then I'll hope that you change.
    I can deal with the ridicule,
    and the feel that I'm strange.
    I am, I'm different -
    this is my only deliverance,
    so don't shut me out
    too quickly.
    Come on,
    let me in.

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    writerspassion commented on Fill Me In

    01-20-2009

    some people just don't get it. Nice work

    drewking commented on Fill Me In

    01-19-2009

    very nice....

    Iamadreamr commented on Fill Me In

    01-16-2009

    very nice

    fiksy commented on Fill Me In

    01-12-2009

    yeah when i don't talk i guess this is the way i make people feel.

    fiksy commented on Fill Me In

    01-12-2009

    yeah when i don't talk i guess this is the way i make people feel.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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