Sure I'm Crazy

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    Sure I'm Crazy

    I seem to do things on a whim,
    I know I'm becoming whimsical baby.
    Sure, I'm crazy.
    You don't understand this
    after I did that, but maybe...
    no, sure I'm crazy.
    I thought that I have
    these simple ways,
    but I'm confused these days.
    I say, "Hey, sure I'm crazy".
    There's no reason why
    I should cry,
    but inside...
    oh, sure I'm crazy.
    I see you look at me.
    Are you no longer
    hook to me?
    I feel...sure I'm crazy.
    I know it's tempting to call
    it quits
    after all of this,
    struggle with...
    Sure I'm crazy.
    But is there
    another man
    that is connected
    in God's hand, faithful -
    well, am I crazy?

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    bluewolf commented on Sure I'm Crazy

    12-17-2009

    “Jealousy is that pain which a man feels from the apprehension that he is not equally beloved by the person whom he entirely loves” –Joseph Addison Love Is a Many-Splendored Thing; or so I am told. That for some, it drives to the brink of sanity is of little surprise. Some say, “it is better to love, than to never love at all.” I oft wonder-did they ever have their hearts broken?

    causeofbalance commented on Sure I'm Crazy

    12-30-2008

    i like it, and no, your not crazy for believing what you believe. least i think thats why you wrote it. is it?

    JoeMartin commented on Sure I'm Crazy

    12-20-2008

    It's got the beat of "crazy" and the rhythm of obsession with the idea of being called crazy. That one thought breaks up the others. It's got music in it.

    Recluse2010 commented on Sure I'm Crazy

    12-19-2008

    A little hard to follow, but I understand the message. I like your stuff though. I also like the way you write.

    Recluse2010 commented on Sure I'm Crazy

    12-19-2008

    A little hard to follow, but I understand the message. I like your stuff though. I also like the way you write.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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