Atomic Love

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    Atomic Love

    Like proton and electron we attract
    Forming a bond that never falls apart
    You are my proton for i am your electron
    And together with God as our neutron
    We became the perfect atom
     Your womb determines the atomic number
    And together we determined the atomic mass

    We are gas by nature, easily inflamed or raged
    No matter how hard we tried as we aged
    we could never be perfect like a noble gas
    But like Adam and Eve we are the first of our kind
    A true noble of all gasses, bound by love
    So thank you for giving me an Atomic Mass
    For that i am a father and you a mother
    So Happy Mother's Day

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    thecross commented on Atomic Love

    04-28-2010

    An interesting write of love , very creative, nicely done.

    Populous

    05/02/2010

    thank you

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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