battle prayer

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    battle prayer
    sword of chaos sword of life come forth now release your light
    love of heaven hate of hell chaos's fury in me dwell
    cure of heaven curse of hell may my heart be pure of all
    born in chaos raised and living i command these powers of chaos's fury
    with this power i will fight to defeat all evil release the light
    RELEASE

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    TREVON commented on battle prayer

    12-10-2011

    very very good, I really like it. I know chaos, evil, and the great fight.
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    SilverGirl commented on battle prayer

    12-13-2009

    Absolutely beautiful.. concise and meaningful.. Very good write.. Hugs SG
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    dangedmanjr commented on battle prayer

    03-30-2009

    nice prepatory action piece...[erhaps use some commas in the future, it will make it a little easier to read.
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