whats happening to me

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    whats happening to me

    I lock myself away hiding all my pain
     i walk through this room not feeling at all
    how long can i hold my feelings kept so close
     a light i see i hope it comes to me
     but how can i hope with the pain i've felt so long
     it torments me this insecurity but here i hope it won't stay long
     oh soft light come to me guide me to the dawn
    for here i sit waiting for so long
    love is what i feel but how should i expect you to return it to me
    because i feel so decrypt beaten down by the crashing wave
     will i drown or will you save
    my soul cries out come rescue me but i doubt i'm worth saving
    so please come light take away my pain
    take it back and send it away
     my father can't hear what i say his ashes are to far away
    so should i wait will you carry on
    for here i sit i think i'm to far gone.

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    SilverGirl commented on whats happening to me

    12-13-2009

    This is so profoundly deep and even sadder than that. Do not feel alone.. love is with you.. always has been.. always will be. Keep the faith and stand strong. You are most certainly worthy. please do not let me ever hear you say that again.. It hurts my heart to know that you feel worthless.. May Gods love and light forever guide your way.. HUGS SG

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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