Broken

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    This is the essence of life, if you don't understand now someday you will

    Broken

    The beauty of the broken,
    forever unspoken,
    the words of tomorrow,
    lie in elegant sorrow.

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    TheBean commented on Broken

    01-16-2010

    wow. hats my one word for you. wow. great word choice it really captures emotion

    MichaelTierney

    01/16/2010

    thank you, your wordless state is a true compliment. the poem did for you what it did to me.

    Lizziewriter27 commented on Broken

    01-16-2010

    Wow...how do you do that...its like in those few words you captured a million.

    MichaelTierney

    01/16/2010

    I know I have never been able to duplicate it, a poem quite so short with so much raw power. Then again that poem was the summation of years of thought about life and swept in on the wings of inspiration. I have to remember to let go and relax; to just let it flow out of me.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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