Lost to the riptide

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I like swimming, swimming is fun, so is riding bikes, but this poem isn't like all those crappy poems about bikes. No, this is about SWIMMING!

Lost to the riptide

Do you long to be touched jsut as I do?

I feel the ebb and flow of desire against my side,

I am slowly drowning in you ...

Lost to the riptide.









Now listen to the gentle sound of the ocean waves.

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

MichaelTierney’s Poems (34)

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