US Redefined

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    US Redefined

     What happened to our vehement catastrophe?
    The riptide that buried Under Sheets on our side?
    Our unremitting carnal longing and lustful desires
    Are all but gone and we've nothing left but our pride.

    You once told me to wait because you didn't want
    To be the other woman, but darling there was never
    Anyone but you in this one room hotel I call my heart
    Now this blinking vacant sign serves me only to taunt
    And remind Unreciprocated Sensuality that if we ever
    Daydream that maybe it truly is best not to start

    We are defined by our choices
    You chose not to love me, what for?
    Is there another man in your sight?

    With a tension in our voices
    We ignore what lies before
    Unneeded Sadism tonight

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    emilytwain commented on US Redefined

    01-29-2010

    descriptive in a way that defies the norm...isn't that the ultimate goal of the poet? your word-well runs deep. enjoyed.
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    SavVySam commented on US Redefined

    01-18-2010

    Touche' Michael! You had me cracking up at your responses! This is a very well crafted poem containing memorable lines like 6 & 7! Nice work!
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    MichaelTierney

    01/25/2010

    thank you, I am glad you liked it. I appreciate the comment.

    knight4696 commented on US Redefined

    01-04-2010

    Damn Michael! This is my favorite thus far. Very creative and the metaphors are superb! Great Job! ... Ken
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    MichaelTierney

    01/07/2010

    well stick around because there is more to come

    danmartyjake1 commented on US Redefined

    01-02-2010

    You have talent, my friend and I enjoyed this twist of a poem.
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    MichaelTierney

    01/02/2010

    thank you, I am glad you liked it.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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