Chastize Me With Your Love

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the other day I lost a quarter and was moved with anger and frustration so I wrote this poem. I hope you enjoy.

Chastize Me With Your Love

      I want to lay naked before you
                            ...and be seen
           Touch my skin and feel my
                                ...soul within
   I reveal my vulnerabilities to you
...and you respond with tenderness

Love me deeply, Lust me more
Tie me up on the floor

Somethings are so beautiful
They can only be defiled by words

So in silence,
Let me taste your violence,
Chastize me with your love...

I wait so patiently for your affections

Chastize me
    with your love...

I know it's early for me to say this
And I feel a bit foolish
but I love you...

Can't you see?
How badly I want you to love me?

I don't just want to hear it,
I want to see it, I want to feel it,
I want to know that you love me too.

Can't you see?
All this waiting is killing me?

     Tell me with a whisper,
               Tell me with a kiss...

     Let me hear you whimper,
               Let me be your bliss...

I want you so pationately so,

Chastize me with your love!

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harmony74 commented on Chastize Me With Your Love

11-22-2009

this was all triggered by loosing a quarter??? interesting

MichaelTierney

11/23/2009

Ding Ding Ding! Ladies and Gentlemen, we have a winner! someone spotted my commentary. Yes I loved that quarter.

koolmom0 commented on Chastize Me With Your Love

11-07-2009

WOW!!!! You are a romantic. This is a lovely poem. Koolmom

MichaelTierney

11/07/2009

Now don't go spreading rumors about how hopeless I am. I believe a man should speak for himself.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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