Carl

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  • trying to finish these stories and write more poetry!

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this poem was written for carl, who committed suicide because of so much pain and hurt on the inside. he was the one who stood out to others as a waste of time and space. no one ever told carl he was more than that. at age thirteen, he walked into his school's cafeteria and pulled out a gun, killing himself in front of everyone. in his room, his parents found a poem, expressing carl's inside feelings about himself and everyone around him. they never knew he felt this way, but no one ever took the time out to ask. christians should take their stand and fight for the weak who can't fight for themselves. it's our duty, because we know that God has made us out of love, and he loves every single one of us, especially the hurting. don't be that person who pushed carl away. don't regret the decisions you make

Carl

His name was Carl

He was a lonesome fellow

None of the kids ever looked at him

Not one ever said a hello

On the outside, he was obnoxious and loud

But on the inside, he was shrunken inside himself

He was only thirteen the day he took his own life

He was tired of everyone looking at him with hatred in their eyes

Most of the time he was out of the way

And most of the kids preferred him having nothing to say

No one ever told Carl that he was amazing

That God thought he was more than wasted space

And by the time someone noticed him, it was too late

He'd already left this world

He was finally out of the way

The kids all regretted the decision he made

To end his own life in the cafeteria that day

But they couldn't rewind time's clock to that second

They couldn't bring him back from the dead

But they learned a lesson from Carl

They learned that every second of life is borrowed

And what you do with those moments determine your tomorrow

We're not promised forever, or even today

So stand up for the weak, don't be afraid

If only someone would have stood up for Carl

He could have been alive today without so much pain and sorrow

Live with no regrets

Because everyone needs at least one touch from a friend

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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