Darkness

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Darkness

Fighting through the dark
wishing I could see the light
as my choices make there mark
I still havent made flight

in the endless shadow 
I stumble and fall
as I head for what seems like a glow
down this endless hall

it seems it wont go away
no matter how fast I run
and no matter what I say
the darkness has won

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purdylox commented on Darkness

05-10-2010

I really like this and feel like the darkness has won me over some times as well really like the pic you matched with it one thing though spell check its my best friend lolol

1990lh commented on Darkness

05-10-2010

another great poem i like your style, the mood is perfect to me and your words are gloomy, yet beautiful.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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