Driving Force

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    Driving Force

    I know I will not fail
    but as I lose memory of my mission
    it becomes but a tale
    but I still have ambition

    No one will stop me
    you cant hold me back
    I'll rip you apart like a banshee
    and my thoughts go black

    I'll forget everything but the wrath
    for it's what drives me on
    and I've lost my path
    but it's always the darkest just before the dawn

    Dreams of a better life
    now drive me headlong
    so I can put down the knife
    because I've found where I belong

    The driving force that drove me to dark
    has brought me back to the light
    as fast as fire with a spark
    my future is looking bright.



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    AshRenee commented on Driving Force

    01-29-2011

    I love this poem. It's so sweet, and I hope that if any figment of this is true to life, this was your happy ending. This is one that can change a heart hun, wonderful job!
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    jj1562 commented on Driving Force

    01-16-2011

    why must other people say thing that parallels to me so well? i liked it and you have a great gift for rhyme
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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