Driving Force

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Driving Force

I know I will not fail
but as I lose memory of my mission
it becomes but a tale
but I still have ambition

No one will stop me
you cant hold me back
I'll rip you apart like a banshee
and my thoughts go black

I'll forget everything but the wrath
for it's what drives me on
and I've lost my path
but it's always the darkest just before the dawn

Dreams of a better life
now drive me headlong
so I can put down the knife
because I've found where I belong

The driving force that drove me to dark
has brought me back to the light
as fast as fire with a spark
my future is looking bright.



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AshRenee commented on Driving Force

01-29-2011

I love this poem. It's so sweet, and I hope that if any figment of this is true to life, this was your happy ending. This is one that can change a heart hun, wonderful job!

jj1562 commented on Driving Force

01-16-2011

why must other people say thing that parallels to me so well? i liked it and you have a great gift for rhyme

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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