Lack Of Life

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    Lack Of Life

    My friends are but digital reminders of the past
    my life is non-existent
    and I keep slipping fast
    and my bad luck seems to be persistent

    as I sit here all alone
    while everyone has a life to live
    I feel as if I'm a clone
    as I don't have any of my own feelings to give

    I cant tell if the days are going fast or slow
    I cant seem to think straight
    and my mood is lower than low
    perhaps its fate

    but it burns in my heart like a knife
    that while I remain in this world
    I seem to have a lack of life





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    Lunabella commented on Lack Of Life

    01-27-2011

    Ty for sharing this with me, its a small peak into your soul. I love the poem sweetheart. -Luna

    Rhymer commented on Lack Of Life

    01-26-2011

    Dark poetry is a favorite of mine, this seems to me a person has slipped into depression and reflecting their feelings. 10

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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