Start Over

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Start Over

The pain that I wish you saw,

From here its a lonely view,

Whats it like where the painters draw,

Hopefully they can start anew.

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Crush commented on Start Over

02-15-2010

not too shabby....big punch, short stance. nice ! sometimes the fewest words say the most.

cdeluhery87 commented on Start Over

02-15-2010

Such power in such a short poem, this is great caboose "The pain that I wish you saw, from here its a lonely view" wonderful

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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