Start Over

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Start Over

The pain that I wish you saw,

From here its a lonely view,

Whats it like where the painters draw,

Hopefully they can start anew.

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Crush commented on Start Over

02-15-2010

not too shabby....big punch, short stance. nice ! sometimes the fewest words say the most.

cdeluhery87 commented on Start Over

02-15-2010

Such power in such a short poem, this is great caboose "The pain that I wish you saw, from here its a lonely view" wonderful

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

caboose187’s Poems (24)

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This Time 0
Wall Around My Heart 2
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That's Life 0
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Distrust 0
The Abyss 0
Dreams to Nightmares 0
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Suicidal 0
Immortal 0
Destruction 0
Of Natural Mind 0
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Lack Of Life 2
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Dark Fight 2
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Pain of Losing Family 2
Start Over 2
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