Dear old friend

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  • Friendship
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  • Loss
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  • Death
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  • Inspirational

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    Poetry should be enjoyed, not criticized

    Dear old friend

    For those who pass, I give this task.
    A favor for me, what then you ask.

    Give me a sign, give me a clue.
    That you’re really there, and that it is you.

    For something is lost, and I am too.
    This you can help, please come through.

    I lost my dear friend, which friend you ask.
    The one from the beginning, that accepted this task.

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    DandyLyons commented on Dear old friend

    07-17-2009

    Lost loved ones are always around us.They leave memories we will never forget and send signs that ony those close to them will recognize as their spirit providing comfort and letting us know that they will forever remember us as well.
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    lois2lane245 commented on Dear old friend

    07-16-2009

    hello this is lois2lane245 i accept this challange with grace only to help ur sweet face. i don't want to scare u to bad. i just don't want u to be lonley or sad. so if u want to i'll send a friend request, i hope u accept maybe to ur be the better half.????
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    wheelsal commented on Dear old friend

    07-16-2009

    There is comfort in having a sign. Ask me, because I know. You said this well. Sally.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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