Madness

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    Just another one from my twisted mind

    Madness

    Rage is the anger deep inside,
    anger is the fear you try and hide

    Fear is the short comings in your life,
    madness is the disease that's born inside

    Jealousy is green envy, called the hidden sin, that drives your life from deep within

    Death is God's answer to your sinful pride, to live life long is to live it right

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    learivan commented on Madness

    08-11-2009

    "to live life long is to live it right".. it's having eternal life if you live life righteously.
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    DandyLyons commented on Madness

    07-17-2009

    Rage,fear,and jealousy, when combined, can easily destroy even the purest of hearts.
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    wheelsal commented on Madness

    07-09-2009

    You said it and said it well. Pride does seem to be the root of all sin............................ Sally
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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