Dreams

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    Dreams

    Where do you go when we dream?                                             

    Where do you go?                                                                           

    Do you ever leave your mind?                                                      

    Do leave you body?                                                                        

    Do you fly in the sky?                                                                     

    Do you shimmer with the stars?                                                  

    Do you ever even leave your bed?                                              

    Dreams are the just memoires of a past life?                           

    Or foreshadows of things to come?                                            

    Can a nightmare be fun?                                                             

    Where do you go when you dream?                                         

    Is it fun?                                                                                          

    Is it clean?                                                                                       

    Is it blue?                                                                                         

    Is it green?                                                                                     

    O please o please tells me?                                                        

    I want to know.                                                                              

    How do you get there?

    Do you take plane?

    Or do you ride a train?                                  

    I have no dreams.                                                                          

    I lost my ticket.                                                                               

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    MootPoint commented on Dreams

    01-07-2011

    I read this one because I am interested in dreams. I have several in a night. So many I can't remember them all. Some wake me up. I think they are your subconscience trying to tell you something. You really don't have dreams?
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    nightscrawling

    01/07/2011

    some times i dont even have dreams at all and when i do have one i only remember a few secounds of it and then i totaly forget every thing . i have about 6 dreams i can still remember .

    Marsink commented on Dreams

    12-25-2010

    It is, to me, reflective of Dr. Zeuss until the last line, that explains your lack of dreams or dreaming. The rhyming and cadence are well structured and the twist on the subject matter is creative. Check your work before posting for errors, or have another, who is gifted with such concerns, look it over. Applause building!
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    nightscrawling

    12/28/2010

    what is the error ? if it Oh spelled as O . thats just how i prefer to spell it

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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