DriftWould

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    Poem Commentary

    adrift, friendship, love, loneliness, sharing, when do we know a friend is a friend.

    DriftWould

    Drift would

     

    If I am a-drift, would you…Be there

    A star?

    A grappling hook?

    A diving bell?

    An anchor?

    A port?

    A compass?

     

    A charted sea?

    A Sky full of stars on velvet?

     

    Drift Would you be for me? 

    or just

    Driftwood.... 

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    lorenzo commented on DriftWould

    04-08-2011

    beautiful poem, so soulful.........................
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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