inhale into me

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inhale into me

shine
smooth
warm

glowing-
hot

sticky breath
fingerprint 
white mark softens to pink again

clenched
held
pressed
molded

molten
moist
wet
pooling

throat relaxes
tongue tastes pressing
lips open breath sigh

must remember to always
thank me
and 
it starts 
again. 
inhale!

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crowndominant commented on inhale into me

03-24-2011

hot I can feel your inside thoughts in this poem, just makes my mouth water (I hope that comes across properly)

mdpoetgirl commented on inhale into me

02-17-2011

the photo works so well with this poem... very sensual, passionate piece.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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