wold cind

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a calligrapher, artist and writer, which is worse? Hard to say, sometimes nothing beats a good brush, ink and an idle moment with magnets in its guts.

wold cind

words 
and
litter
and 
wind

separated by gusts

and bristles

ink, nib, treetops, pages, branches, thoughts...

eyes

leaves

words

brushed about scattered 

...meanings...

orlefttolietogether

whichisworse

witchesworse

switch horse


 

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Jammin commented on wold cind

11-06-2011

Oh I love this! So youthful and playful. Makes me nostalgic. A 10 from me.

shallenemcgrath commented on wold cind

02-13-2011

This is an interesting poem... I feel you finding the versatility in writing. I love what you do with the structure on the page. I also have switched horses, just to try and figure out which was worse.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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