Red Beans and Rice Day

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New Orleans has lots of lovers, and as with all who gain popularity, lots of 'haters' too. That doesn't change that this city isn't perfect. This city isn't always picturesque. This city doesn't always smell wonderful. In fact, most times, it might not smell too nice at all... but, if this city gets under your skin, you're done for. You'll have to come back or you'll just yearn to for the rest of your days. Amen.

Red Beans and Rice Day

calling, the streetcar line
the screeching and groaning
heard calling
many blocks away

in my dreams in other lands

across the miles

and then there's the river's moans
she moans in her sleep and in ours. 

the giant bellowing fish that float
bellies filled and
bellies emptied
with the wealth of other lands

like fat men floating on their backs
blowing smoke rings and
floating with their giant bellies rising above the levee

from the streets we look up to see them floating on the river

one never considers
and then, one day, one does
and it's a chortle of recognition

where we are, in relation to that traffic of steel-bellied fat men
playing poker with their guts at our ports
showing their poker faces to our dollar
and drinking our whiskey

and they are not the only ones.
we know our whiskey glass

mardi gras, jazz fest, hell! plain ole Monday
Heaven ain't got nuttin' on our Red Beans and Rice Day

and the chunky slither of our river
in her clingy glittered dress
magnificent with her undulating hips and curves almighty

i love rising up over her,
and gazing down upon her as she writhes powerfully below me
drawing my gaze, reaching up and tugging my eyeballs
and pushing up the corners of my mouth with her
slinky shiny mass, the view from a bridge, the brooch on her bosom. 

she wraps around the city tightly
and the city around her
tight friction and runoff oil sealant hold them together
now and forever

me and my Bourbon, Royal and Canal-Walking Brethren
St. Charles, mama streetcar, witchie woman
hungover man, whiskers scratchy, Tom Waits voice

mardi gras, jazz fest, hell! plain ole Monday
Heaven ain't got nuttin' on our Red Beans and Rice Day. 



 

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mdpoetgirl commented on Red Beans and Rice Day

02-17-2011

I can feel the passion and love for the city of New Orleans in this piece... this poem reminds me of poetry from the greats - like Langston Hughes in his reminiscence of Harlem. Beautifully and cleverly done.

dancinghawk commented on Red Beans and Rice Day

02-14-2011

this is an incredible piece ... formed in form-less-ness, like the mightly river herself ... eschewing regular ryhme for an urban underbelly beat, "bellies filled and / bellies emptied" ... "she wraps around the city tightly / and the city around her" ... insider observations shared with outsiders, keenly ... very nice work ... -dh

VoiceMilkNHoney

02/14/2011

wow! thanks DancingHawk, what beautiful symmetry to your offering. I am enthralled, pleased and wowed. Thank you Thank you! "Incredible"?? you compliment me deeply.

VoiceMilkNHoney

02/14/2011

and I love the comment: "insider observations shared with outsiders, keenly" that's meaningful to me. thanks, again.

VoiceMilkNHoney commented on Red Beans and Rice Day

02-14-2011

This poem captures a little bit of the feeling of what New Orleans means to me. The Mighty Mississipp and the Crescent City, so-named because of this River, are lovers, wrapped tightly around one another, dependent upon one another....oily, dirty, sometimes smelly, sometimes gorgeous together, sometimes caustic..but always there, lying together. it's a constantly being-written poem, this city.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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