walt-zuh

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  • Dancing Pain Poetry

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    dance lessons are a disaster waiting to happen. I want to be like Neo. --Headset, and---zap! I am a whirling amazing dervish with By-The-Book Steps! Yes, Shallene!

    walt-zuh

     one-two-three---four
    close enough
    she figures

    her count
    is 
    off
    but his hand 
    is on
    her supple waist

    and that counts
    for a lot
    she thinks

    one-two---three-four
    oh well
    who needs
    ten toes

    toes are overrated anyway
    he grimaces

    step two three and
    and     
    four
    and 
    four? 

    Thank you so much. 

    Lovely to meet you...

    where's the door?
     

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    StandingBear commented on walt-zuh

    02-24-2011

    No kidding, now you have me thinking of marketing ladies dancing shoes with steel toes built in... hmmm
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