Duck Blind

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    Duck Blind

    In the pre-dawn cold we gather,
    Stamping feet, blowing on fingers,
    Waiting for the cook-stove to heat coffee.
    Stepping into icy cold water
    Is a moment of pure faith, belief
    That your waders haven’t sprung a leak.
    Ice broken, decoys placed, guns loaded
    We take our places side by side
    Waiting for that magic moment,
    Half an hour before sunrise-
    Shooting Time.
    The sky is low and misty,
    Filled with wraith-like clouds
    Out of which ducks appear and disappear
    Like Vegas stage magicians.
    The six-year old with us can see ducks
    Far better than any of our middle aged eyes.
    “Four! Straight ahead!” he cries,
    “Don’t call, just shoot!”
    In a few years, he won’t even bother to tell us,
    But right now, he won’t shoot
    Without his daddy’s permission.
    A single green-head circles the blind
    And cups up directly in front of me.
    Deep breath, hold it, aim, squeeze.
    The shot echoes off the surrounding trees.
    Feathers drift silently to the water’s surface.

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    NevillePark commented on Duck Blind

    11-29-2010

    You're a competent writer. Good human interest piece and the images have no problem jumping into our line of sight.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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