Men Drinking Coffee

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    Men Drinking Coffee

    Every morning
    Leaning on the half-wall
    Waiting until their cups get empty
    I hear their conversations

    Today, it was crops
    And more importantly
    Duck season, coming in six weeks
    And four days

    The talk of men,
    Comfortable in themselves
    Pressed in close, six to a table
    Meant for four

    Men with dirty hands
    And worn jeans
    Caps blackened by the dust
    Of a thousand acres of bean field

    I love this sound
    The low murmur of voices
    The ebb and flow, like a warm tide
    With occasional waves of laughter

    They solve the problems
    Of the entire world
    From their seats along the wall
    Slurping coffee and smoking

    They joke and banter and kid
    With the easy familiarity
    That comes from belonging,
    To this particular piece of ground

    I let this sound wash over me
    And let it fill my soul 
    With comfort and belonging
    And peace

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    NevillePark commented on Men Drinking Coffee

    11-29-2010

    I'm absolutely sure that there's a place for your work out there. You are marketable in a society where pathos and fluff want to hold a controlling interest. I pray God will open doors for you.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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