Fallen

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  • Lost Love

    Fallen
    I see you there with that look in your eyes
    and my heart cries for you.
    Night after night of endless strangers
    finding their way to your bed;
    night after night of endless despair
    as I long for your arms around ME.

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    kdarcy commented on Fallen

    05-25-2009

    Does the heart cry for them or yourself? A short intense piece that needs no more words to feel. Night after Night, almost says it all, good write.
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    Pypersong

    05/27/2009

    My heart bleeds and my soul cries for all, myself included. Thanks for the comment.

    soulwriter commented on Fallen

    05-17-2009

    Sometimes a few words spoken spills out a river of emotion... well said!
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    kenparme commented on Fallen

    05-06-2009

    This is a good capture of that desolate feeling. Short but striking.
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