The Elm and The Oak

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    The Elm and The Oak

    ...and against the setting sun, silhouettes;
    dark as india ink on fine white linen, bare branches
    reaching, brushing the underbelly of the sky.
    Brittle and dark and spider thin,
    drawn by the expert hand of God
    and Nature; bowing and leaping forth in the wind,
    with an artist's grace they seem to paint the heavens.
    Arcing across the sky with purple and gold,
    bursts of orange and sweeping brushstrokes of red.
    Painting, perhaps, the splendour they wear only briefly
    at summer's end.

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    kenparme commented on The Elm and The Oak

    05-06-2009

    This poem to me is a painting. Very creative and lovely-great job.

    lightcourier commented on The Elm and The Oak

    04-22-2009

    I really like the vibrant picture you painted. Excellent imagery! Sent my mind wandering. Thanks!

    origionalmerlin commented on The Elm and The Oak

    04-22-2009

    excellent word choice, logical progerssion, feeling and imagry clear.. an excellant bit of writing.. thanks for posting these.. andrew

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Pypersong’s Poems (18)

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    (Elemental) 0
    Wondering 6
    Her answer (in her own words, not mine) 2
    Trembling 5
    Fallen 3
    She 1
    Unanswered 1
    Mommy 1
    A raindrop Knows 0
    If Only 1
    Show Me 1
    Rebirth 1
    Pause 0
    Merciful Death 3
    Oubliette 1
    What If? 0
    A Certain Symmetry 2
    The Elm and The Oak 3