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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Quote: WHERE IS BOB IN ALL OF THIS?????? IF YOU SEE HIM GET MY WEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like weed! that's funny! I gotta lotta great pomes! five read em and weep! |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I'm new here and new to poetry. I would great appreciate some criticism about my work. I look forward to review some of the work of others here. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I'm new to this site and haven't had too many critiques, but I'd be very interested in getting some feedback. Please feel free to do so and I shall return the favor if so desired. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I am down... critique me away |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Feel free to massacre my brain children. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I am very interested in this. I have always wanted some feedback, no matter what kind. and the truthful is the best. i have been on this site for a while and don't think anyone has read anything. although i am having a block kind of year, i would still like feedback to help get me out of this slump i am in. i am more than willing to help anyone in anyway that i can. thank you for setting this up. good luck to everyone. i hope you all receive what you need to continue on with your writing. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?thank you very much for having a place where i can get help with my work before submitting it to others to read i ahev written my first poem and i had a respond of not goood editing not sure where i went wrong just put down what i was feeling hope that i can be help here to become a better writer |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?poetry hangover |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Decision to Strip |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I've been a bit of a stranger to the forum here for a few days, but it's always fun and a bit enlightening to check back on old topics, as well as, read a few new ones... I guess I'm no different than anyone reading other people's thoughts, I get my own... Sometimes it's difficult to distinguish the issues, from poems... I mean, every poem has some kind of issue for it's existence in the first place, right...??? Reading through comments here, a recurrent theme of some is about structure and style; which is preferred, right, wrong, or otherwise... Another common statement is openly asking for others to critique a person's work and freely offer any advice or criticism about it... As to the structure and style, if it matters to the reader, they'll take issue with that over content; either silently, or say something openly... As to the pitching material works, everyone is shameless there because they want to get read.... But, not everyone is humble or receives feedback, criticism, or advise objectively about their work... Who can blame them...??? It's personal... It's their creation... It doesn't make someone stronger or better by punching them in the chin just to show them they're guard technique is flawed... To me, that's nothing more than offering them ridicule and it won't always be taken the right way, even if well intentioned... I stated in another forum topic about rating poems that anyone who chooses to offer constructive criticism, I believe they should do it privately... Using up comment space to publicly pick and snip at their piece, well... I look at it this way, not one author's name here is listed anywhere as one of the greats of world literature... Noone is perfect, nor the ultimate authority on poetry... So, it comes down to just one thing; personal opinion... And, we all know about opinions, don't we...??? LOL... |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?It's not about the rhythm or rhyme Last edited by aliciagall 07-16-2009 at 05:00:17 PM |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I agree with Doug (laydbak1). I will offer constructive criticism in private. It is subject to acceptance or rejection by the author. I do not tend to do it openly since you only create friction. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?W.o.W........ people people people....there is a lot of emotions ttied up in this forum.....the main reason that I have not put my two cents in since the very start of it and at that time didn't understand the motivation and purity of heart that jademellissa had when she started it......I think even to some extent after all the replies and thoughts expressed by so many different people, her stance on the subject has shifted a little to a more excepting encouraging place.....and i commend her for that.....Erika I truly adore your pure heart......and positive outlook on life poetry and the power you have at your disposal...... few people know the true power of their words...... Last edited by JadedJezzabel 07-17-2009 at 03:59:25 AM |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I write for many reasons......at first it was prior to any internet that I knew of and it was for grades......then it was entertainment for my friends and me to insult one another in the most creative ways possible...then it started becoming my running comentary on my life and the drama I put myself through and it evolved into my ongoing conversations with myself about the world in general........as far as being published it probably will never happen as i have no idea how to even pursue it............as far as what motivates me to write is to challenge myself to creativly blog in rhyme about my trials in life, my relationships with myself and others and my lessons hard learned.....creative self expressions of a challenging nature |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I like the word critique better than criticism. This is something I must do for my students. I am always careful and begin with what works before I begin my critique. I will never critique unless asked. If someone puts something on paper that is the first step. Words are sacred to the poet and some use their writings to vent. This venting becomes their psychiatrist. |
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poetry editorcan anyone suggest a person or firm specializing in editing poetry as opposed to books , novels etc ?? please . |
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Re: poetry editorQuote: Originally Posted by poetography can anyone suggest a person or firm specializing in editing poetry as opposed to books , novels etc ?? please . Poetography as you go thru the poets biographies be sure to read about them alot of poets here are more than capable of editing you'd be surprised make friends and ask nicely and play nice as for me i am unsubscribing from this particular forum topic its getting out of hand studly111 i just to say that i wasn't surprised to see poetography post poems here i took it as his way to get us back on the subject and he was willing to be critiqued... in any event thank you all for your time in reading my thoughts and comments have a good one |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I am very interested in constructive criticism. Please feel free to look at my poetry and comment on it. I agree that there is a lot of poetry that is not as good as others, and I've written some myself. I think I've written some that are dead on and some that are not as good. So please, feel free, if you dare, to read my poetry and comment on it. It can only help me be a better writer. And isn't that what this is all about. Too much touchy, feely comments are not useful. It isn't enough to just say you like or don't like something. You need to delve into the reasons why. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Erika, at your request, I have deleted my reply to the uncalled comment made by Studly111. You deserve the utmost respect. I am truly sorry that some people are unable to be eloquent. |
To have great poets there must be great audiences too.
Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)