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Re: a simple manQuote: Originally Posted by poetography A Simple Man I’m a simple man and grateful for the vegetables that I gathered and boiled in a pot to make nourishing soup. This soup will make many meals for me. I’m a simple man and grateful for the money that I used to buy a long, freshly–baked loaf of French bread. This bread will make many breakfasts for me. I’m a simple man and grateful for the red wine and pure water I drank with my tasty hot soup and bread tonight. This wine and water will make many drinks for me. I am a simple man and grateful for the words I wrote on clean white sheets of paper. These words will make many poems for me. This is simply bad. What's the point? |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?ROADMAP TO INSANITY |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Please feel free to evaluate my poetry. How can i get better if i dont hear from you. Last edited by donnyl3224 08-07-2009 at 04:16:26 PM |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I'm in! Let me have it. Cause I know I'm one of the ones that leave you hanging. Lol! Anything you feel like saying please do. Either here or my email. cherokeelady1980@yahoo.com |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Hi, I am new here. I'm a singer/ songwriter/poet. I've got a few poems posted and I'd love to exchange critiques. Please feel free to give constructive criticism. No offense will be taken. I'd love to hone my poetry skills and I will return the favor. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Hello all ! My friend jademelissa74 invited me to this forum a couple of months back, only I have been out of the scene since then. I havn't really written anything since then either, so I think this is a good time to receive some inspiration, and/or motivation.With a little criticism,comments, or positive/negative feedback,I can achieve this. I will take no offense to criticism,in fact I would be delighted to know that my poems are being read. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I welcome any and all constructive criticism. Knock yourselves out! |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Cool! I wish you would post a coment about my poem...good or bad i don't care! |
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Can you handle it? My Howl \,,/(-.-)\,,/Follow me into light Last edited by WordSlinger 08-09-2009 at 11:22:38 AM |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I would love some constructive criticism :D |
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Re: Can you handle it? My Howl \,,/(-.-)\,,/Quote: Originally Posted by WordSlinger Follow me into light you may find it's not so bright. keep up yur werk, lol \,,/(-.-)\,,/ John, You are too funny buddy! ) Love, Erika |
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Re: Re: a simple manQuote: Originally Posted by MootPoint Originally Posted by poetography A Simple Man I’m a simple man and grateful for the vegetables that I gathered and boiled in a pot to make nourishing soup. This soup will make many meals for me. I’m a simple man and grateful for the money that I used to buy a long, freshly–baked loaf of French bread. This bread will make many breakfasts for me. I’m a simple man and grateful for the red wine and pure water I drank with my tasty hot soup and bread tonight. This wine and water will make many drinks for me. I am a simple man and grateful for the words I wrote on clean white sheets of paper. These words will make many poems for me. This is simply bad. What's the point? SOUNDS LIKE STUDLY111'S TWIN |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Greetings Fellow Poet, |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I invite you all to read my poems and share your opinions and criticisms. I hope that I can bring a sense of enlightenment, humor, reflection, and understandings through my writings. Although before, I've written mostly out of hobby, I'm beginning to realize my gift and invite you all to share. Please feel free to comment openly. Here is a sample... there's more posted on my page and many more to share. Thanks for your opinions! Last edited by MobStyles 08-17-2009 at 07:22:10 AM |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I am interested in constructive criticism in order to perfect my writing. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Constructive criticism is exactly what I came here for! I must warn you though.... I rarely use punctuation in my writings. I prefer my readers to be able to draw their own personal message out of my works rather than guid them through what I may have been feeling at the time I wrote it so please keep that in mind! Other than that, I hope you enjoy them! |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Im always down for a good bashing of my poetry. Feel free to bash away on anything i post on this site. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Quote: Originally Posted by jademelissa74 I have been reading many poems in this site. Some are great, amazing, and simply delightful. Some others, are of very poor quality. Now, I do not necessarily mean poor grammar or usage of the English language, I just simply mean, a poor message. You know that message that I am talking about? The one that doesn't reach the reader? Yes, that particular one that strikes you with a great beginning and leaves you wondering where exactly the sense of direction was lost. The one that you want to rate or comment poorly but are afraid to say anything to avoid hurting feelings. Some people have great ideas and just simply need a little help to guide them through. Hints that would stick forever, if they choose to continue to write. I am inviting you to become a part of a circle of poets that help each other, criticize work with honorable words and inflict routes to find the right direction to a great poem. If you are interested, and can handle constructive criticism well, then let us begin analyzing each other's work. Simply post your reply and choose the poet. Let us begin to praise and applaud the pieces and/or criticize and guide each other. If you would like to convey a praise, then scream it! If you have constructive criticism, please be cordial to your fellow poets and send your opinions in a private message. Good Luck! Hope to hear from you! With much love and respect, Erika Brown "A poet is raw and unashamed, then finds a way to ease your frustrations with a comforting rage, sooth your spirits like the smoke of sage. A poet keeps you totally engaged with epic sentiments, that have you on the edge of your emotions, make you feel dizzy with lyrical potions. A poet is full to the brim with antonyms, like he was liberated while imprisioned, because life is about our own decisions" I am all in. Critique away. This is a warning... My pieces are dark in nature. Lustfulsoul |
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Re: Re: Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Quote:
Originally Posted by BDIsernhagen Originally Posted by WordSlinger I have to ask you all a question, ok???? If I write about faith in a religion, then turn around and write an xxx poem, with just as much passion, and skill then would I get judged as a person or a poet? Or would just the poem be judged? This is an important question don't ya think? So before we begin, I like some feed back on that. I think it will be fun, but who am I to Criticise?? Sorry for being a pain, lol John E WordSlinger Laws were ust madeto keep honest people honest. That's what i think. ok laws where made to be broken by the poor because laws were made to protect the rich, so keep that in mind http://www.bing.com/search?q=criticism&src=IE-SearchBox It is my humble opinion that the two (person V. poet) cannot be separated, for your poetry is your observations on life, and your perception depends on you as a person. people are poets, poets are people... but maybe I'm just to nieve to see what you're really getting at. I see the point of it all, makeing sure that we "keep it buiness" or something along those lines, and not start a word war about morality, but... |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I am always interested in constructive criticism. My poems are all from my life and from the heart. I am always open to improving my art. This seems like a good start. So check out Tempestlady, I think you will see, some are good, some are just for therapy. But your comments i will appreciate, constructive or not, cuz poetry is subjective, and about emotions from the heart. |
A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.
Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.