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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?feel free to critique, good, bad, whatever....i'm always curious what feelings (if any) my poems evoke in others.... |
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a simple manA Simple Man |
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weekendweekend |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Apology |
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hell and buddha in the suburbshttp://www.originalpoetry.com/hell-and-buddha-in-the-suburbs_2 |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?http://www.originalpoetry.com/taller-than-wide |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?thanks for the invite - please be crucially honest. I'm new at this, but want to know what will make me better at it. Let's do this thing. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?I believe I can handle constructive criticism, because I know it can only help me and I like to think I wouldn't be so uptight as to take offense to it. I have been writing for as long as I remember (although I'm only 15), however I have just recently decided to write poetry. I am used to recieving a lot of praise for my writing, from family, teachers etc, and I have also been published in Teenink magazine a couple times (sorry if that sounds braggy). It would be good for me to hear constructive criticism from other writers who probably aren't as biased as my parents, however. So please, I welcome anyone to my page who wants to read my poems, rate, comment, and constructively criticize by any means. Thank you. Last edited by ChewyRibbit 07-21-2009 at 06:57:50 PM |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Count me in. I am all ears....... |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Sure why not, I've been criticized all my life for being different!!! |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Im in. only published two so far. Twang- and Truth. check them out and hit me hard... Lah! |
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normalhttp://www.originalpoetry.com/normal_5 |
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Robert Mitchum was a Tough GuyRobert Mitchum was a Tough Guy |
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feedbackhow...do you rate some of my recent submissions..do you give feedback on all or just some ? |
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Ballet DanceBallet Dance |
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Re: Ballet DanceQuote: Originally Posted by poetography Ballet Dance Form Function Strength Timing Motion Low tech High style Muscle Focus Perfection Dedication Flying Leaping Jumping Twisting Turning Stretching Toes Arms Shoulders Buttocks Thighs Calves Costumes Colors Spinning top Music Peace Action Simple Complex Cool Real Practice Patience Art Evolutions- Greatest- Graceful- Achievement- To Ballet dance- At Lincoln Center . You did a great 1-2 word capture Po... You should start your own semblance dictionary for nouns and things... Good write..... |
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balletThank you ..I appreciate your appreciation! |
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why poetry for mewhat other art form can you sit down and create something, sometimes in just one sitting.. |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Have you ever wished to blow up at the world, |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Hi there! |
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Apologies are Bull-Shithttp://www.originalpoetry.com/apologies-are-bull-shit |
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My Shit TogetherMy Shit Together |
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The Bulls of New YorkThe Bulls of New York |
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Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?im in, please feel free to comment/critique any or all of my poems! i would love the feedback!!!! |
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Re: Re: Are you interested in constructive criticism? Can you handle it?Yes, I'm in this is totally knew to me I have ALOT of LEARNING to do I know I need help thanks! |
Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.
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