Head aches

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    i have had a 24/7 head ache for the past 3 years

    Head aches

     

    As the thoughts spill in

    My mind crushes like dried leaves

    Piercing               

    Stabbing

    Eating me away

    Regurgitating who I am

    And replacing me

    Like a cracked skull

    The pain seems only to spill out now

    Staining everything I touch

    Numb to my inner core

    I helplessly move on

    Shattered

    Waiting to escape

    This imprisoned state of mind

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    SILKYTWEED commented on Head aches

    06-24-2009

    Excellent Write....you are very talented and seem to write above your age, keep it up, you are very good and deep...thanks for sharing!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    liltrudesi92’s Poems (19)

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    In my head 2
    Cursed 0
    My Blissful Blasphmey 2
    They 3
    wishing 0
    Sick 4
    I never wanted 0
    good enough 1
    to my bro 1
    Wolf 2
    Amazing 1
    Time ( the end) 0
    Need 0
    Deteriorating 1
    Gone 2
    4 months 0
    one month 1
    Head aches 1
    My slice of heaven 2