to my bro

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to my bro

Though the leaves and seasons change

I never thought you would

You were once my iron shield

Yet now you are the wall

Your words once were kind

And a friend is what I could call you

I will always respect you

For I love you

Though don’t take advantage of it

 For I only did what was truly right for me

The person you were was my idle

Now you only seem to push me away

I don’t need another parent I have my own pair

The age difference is large & you are no longer a child

But I still am so let time change me

Change is good yet

I just miss my friend / bro/ idle/role model …

And the robot in his place

Just further brakes me down

I wish you could just respect me and what makes me happy

For the shrink loneliness I feel

Seems to be stretched out

By the absence of you

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boomboom56 commented on to my bro

09-11-2009

You words are so sad and full of heartache. I am sorry for your loss, which you captured so well. Hang in there.

liltrudesi92

09/12/2009

Thank you but he isnt dead.. we r just not close anymore...

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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