Gone

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Gone

Slitting my wrists

I further bleed out pain

Killing what was rightfully mine

I sit sucked out of life

Drowning neck up in guilt

Like tarring the wings off a butterfly

The gash in my heart pulsates

Yet the drum line in my chest

Is a constant reminder

Of the unicorn I slaughter

Thought fate has a plan of its own

I choose the road I’m on

And with each breathe I take

I’m one moment further from you

Left standing

With just red ink in my veins

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LadyLuck commented on Gone

07-01-2009

i love the bleeding picture you paint here. its beautiful in a bloody kinda way.

SILKYTWEED commented on Gone

06-24-2009

Excellent Write....like the style you got it going on this piece, I especially like how you ended it "with just red ink in my veins"...Thanks for sharing!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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