Deteriorating

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Deteriorating

Deteriorating

As what we have

Begins to wither away

This shatters

Like broken glass

Our words seem only to cut now

Scared

For this can’t be the end

My love is the parachute

To our falling out

Yarning for this tear to mend

I miss being you friend

For you are truly amazing

And I’ve made many mistakes

But you will never be one of them

So can we just forget the little things

That seems to split us

Because you are my vice

And I can’t be without you

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oldgoat commented on Deteriorating

07-20-2009

Very Good! You are so young and have great talent, keep writing!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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